Does Lester's bad luck kick in because of his knife-gunning the cables or him flinging the gun and weathervane? I think your entry is most striking in dialogue and dynamic shots. The pacing in some scenes is a little abrupt (like the fight between the two men on (in?) the roof of the bank, but I suppose that is part of a snapshots effect?
lol it only took three pages before ifigured out his name lol i love it so far and the molelester...opps Lester Mole dude is...different. lol keep it going!!!! (molester is intentionally spelled wrond.... XD.....I am an idiot!)