Does Lester's bad luck kick in because of his knife-gunning the cables or him flinging the gun and weathervane? I think your entry is most striking in dialogue and dynamic shots. The pacing in some scenes is a little abrupt (like the fight between the two men on (in?) the roof of the bank, but I suppose that is part of a snapshots effect?
lol it only took three pages before ifigured out his name lol i love it so far and the molelester...opps Lester Mole dude is...different. lol keep it going!!!! (molester is intentionally spelled wrond.... XD.....I am an idiot!)
must say, I am totally in love with your nack for plot and insane humor. while still illustrating totally kick-arse. really hope you get far in this tourney, looking forward to more amazing annie action!
HA HAAAAAA... Lil....you blow me away. Your sense of humour is impeccable, yout pacing unimpeachable, and you have two of the dirtiest, sexiest, silliest, most gripping characters i've ever run into. *salute* Hail to the Queen, baby.